Alex

Alone

 Writing  Comments Off on Alone
Jun 202011
 

This piece was written as a companion piece to Rylan Hunter’s One And One Equals One.  I wrote Wicked Game and the soon-to-be released Playing For Keeps with Rylan and he is my best friend.

Alone
Dedicated to Rylan Hunter

I walk alone.
I enjoy the solitude.

The deafening silence within and without echoes through my soul.  It energizes my mind and reawakens my senses.  I am like a coastal redwood soaring over the forest or the highest mountain in a snow-capped range.

Loneliness brings no fear because I have myself.  I am myself.  And I am strong.

I walk alone.
So that I may walk with you.

 Posted by at 10:55 pm

Texas Burger

 Food, Recipes  Comments Off on Texas Burger
Jun 172011
 

Happy Father’s Day to all the Dad’s out there.  Here’s what I had on Memorial Day and it’s a perfect Dad-burger.   I think y’all should have one or two this weekend!

Texas Burger
Garlic Texas toast, make sure it’s really buttery
Sliced Colby or Monterey Jack cheese
Barbeque sauce, preferably mesquite
Red onion, grilled or sautéed by your partner  😀
Mayonnaise
Steak sauce, optional
Salt and pepper to taste

 Posted by at 11:42 pm

There And Back Again

 Authors  Comments Off on There And Back Again
Jun 122011
 

My first experience with any of Tolkien’s works was when my fourth grade teacher read us The Hobbit. I loved every minute of that reading. I was swept away to a magical world of dragons, wizards and adventure.

The Hobbit follows the undertakings of Bilbo Baggins, a home-loving hobbit, and 13 dwarves to reclaim a dragon’s hoard. I used to be able to recite all the dwarves’ names! After many wild and wondrous adventures, the story reaches its climax in the Battle of Five Armies, where many of the characters and creatures from earlier chapters reappear. While there are strong themes of growth, heroism and conflict in the story, I was more attracted to the incredible setting of Middle Earth and the fantastic events in the journey of an almost-unwitting hero.

My favorite characters, though, were not the protagonists. I have to admit that I never could empathize with dwarves or hobbits.  Gandalf the Wizard and the elves enthralled me. In the story, the elves are cast more as villains until the very end but that did not diminish their appeal. They are beautiful, slender and graceful while still being deadly combatants in battle!

I’ve been hooked for life and can’t wait for the new Hobbit movie from Peter Jackson.

 

 Posted by at 10:43 pm

Goals for June 2011

 Writing  Comments Off on Goals for June 2011
Jun 032011
 

Even though it’s summer, no lazy days for me.  It seems pretty daunting now that I have a list.  I have a lot of work ahead of me…

  1. Finish editing my new novel, a dark occult thriller!
  2. Meet more people on Twitter and Facebook.
  3. Meet other gay fiction fans, both online and in person.
  4. Come up with a really good title for my novel.
  5. Finish editing the sequel to Wicked Game, Playing For Keeps.
  6. Get Possession of Truth in a few more bookstores.
  7. Start and finish my next story for JoyBoy Island.
  8. Introduce myself to book clubs nationwide

 

 Posted by at 11:29 pm

Why Eben Foster joined the FBI

 Possession of Truth  Comments Off on Why Eben Foster joined the FBI
May 312011
 

Since I’ve started formulating my next mystery, I decided to write about Eben today.  Yes, the book is going to have him in it but it’s not really a sequel to Possession of Truth. It’s another mystery that happens after Possession of Truth but can stand alone.

Eben decided to join the FBI for two main reasons.  The first is his strong sense of justice and desire to right wrongs.  That’s an integral part of his character.  The second is the scope of the FBI versus other law enforcement agencies.

Local police have jurisdiction only in the city or town where they are employed.  Sheriff’s departments are the legal officers of a county.  Their duties range from legal, political and ceremonial and vary greatly from county to county.  State troopers have authority to conduct law enforcement activities and criminal investigations throughout the state.

Eben found the thought of working for any of those too limiting. He was frustrated that many criminals avoided notice, prosecution and justice simply because they moved from jurisdiction to jurisdiction.

The FBI is part of the Department of Justice. It serves as both a criminal investigative body and an internal intelligence agency. The scope of the crimes investigated by the FBI is what appealed to Eben and spurred him to apply and join the Bureau.  He’s had no regrets!

 Posted by at 10:32 pm

Dangling Participles

 Writing  Comments Off on Dangling Participles
May 222011
 

One of the grammatical errors that I despise is the dangling participle.  (It sounds too much like dangling wanker, which is not a pretty thought.)

A participle needs to be immediately next to the word that it is describing, and it’s dangling if it’s in the wrong spot.  (A participle is an adjective derived from a verb.)  It’s like a cute twink, glued to his daddy.  Some examples of participles are running water, dancing cannibals, and masturbating chickens.  Notice the correct placement of the participle right next to the noun it’s describing.

Here is one blatant mistake: “Writing and editing incredibly detailed and erotic sex scenes from dawn all the way to dusk, the computer screen makes my eyes hurt.”  WTF?!  This sentence is so wrong.  First of all the computer does not make my eyes hurt.  (Vivid image of the computer poking my eyes out.)  Staring at the screen makes my eyes hurt.  But that’s not even the dangling wanker… er… ummm… I mean participle.

“Writing and editing incredibly detailed and erotic sex scenes from dawn all the way to dusk…” is the participle phrase.  It is cozied up to the noun “computer screen,” therefore the screen is the one that is writing and editing! I obviously don’t pay my computer screen enough.

The correct version should read something like: “Staring at the computer screen when I’m writing and editing incredibly detailed and erotic sex scenes from dawn all the way to dusk makes my eyes hurt.”

Why are dangling participles so prevalent?  I’ve decided that the reason is two-fold.  First, many people simply don’t know the rule and don’t even realize they are making a grammatical error.  Second, dangling participles sound better than a grammatically correct sentence.  They have zing, they have flair, and they give a paragraph some serious spiff.  All that takes a lot more work to do in the grammatically correct fashion.

 Posted by at 10:14 pm

Clean and Jerk

 Possession of Truth  Comments Off on Clean and Jerk
May 082011
 

Ultimate Health and Fitness is one of two gyms on JoyBoy Island.  It’s your standard full-service gym, but what sets it apart are the people who work there.  Lenny and Jorge, a long-term couple, are the owners who relocated to Anteros from Miami. Lenny skirts most of his duties to socialize with the members, gossip, play matchmaker and get in a quick game of racquetball.

Jorge, meanwhile, usually ends up doing half of what Lenny is supposed to do. While Jorge is typically the more serious of the two, he does like to go to nightclubs.  A few drinks at the Whirling Albatross make him even more loquacious than his partner, and he has been known to blurt things out inappropriately.

Ultimate employs a full cadre of personal trainers, all of whom make working out fun in their own special way. They are big, buff and exceptionally attractive. Chris, who appears in Possession of Truth, is a major beefcake but has a goofy sense of humor. Despite his attractive appearance, he just can’t land a date.

Jake, who is featured in Dangerous Desire, is shy but seems to have every aspect of his life under control.  Unfortunately, he’s harboring a dark secret that threatens to destroy both him and the man he loves.

Come to Ultimate!  It’s more than just a workout!

 Posted by at 9:16 pm

Commentary on The Veldt by Ray Bradbury

 Authors  Comments Off on Commentary on The Veldt by Ray Bradbury
May 052011
 

One of my all-time favorite authors is Ray Bradbury.  I love just about everything he’s written and I admire how his writing seems to jump off the pages and almost become a movie in my mind.  I’ve tried to mimic that style.

In The Veldt a family has just purchased a house with the latest technology and machines that do everything. Even from just the early description, Bradbury’s opinion on this can be seen. Too much reliance on technology is not a blessing.

The nursery in the book is able to connect with the children telepathically and can create any place they imagine. The children soon do nothing but live in the worlds created by the nursery. Here I see Bradbury pointing to the dangers of losing touch with reality. Fantasy can and should be pretty and it is a nice escape but it can never replace the real world. When it does, trouble looms on the horizon.

The parents eventually change their minds and decided to eliminate their reliance on technology.  The children beg their parents to let them have one last visit to the nursery and the parents relent. Any parent can empathize with children wanting just a little more of something they’ve been allowed to have for a long time. Bradbury implies that the parents should have refused. I disagree. The request is not unreasonable as written.

When the parents come to the nursery to retrieve the children, the kids lock them in from the outside. This is where it starts to unravel logically for me.  How did the parents not see the children outside the nursery?  What type of nursery has a lock on it?

SPOILER ALERT: No matter how much you stretch the limits of science fiction and, more importantly, the parameters set up within the story, the death of the parents is implausible. There is no way that the house or the nursery could have created real lions that would have actually eaten the parents. There are precise laws on the subjects of physics, matter and spontaneous generation. Nowhere in the story is this addressed to make the ending credible. Despite this logic flaw, The Veldt is an incredible story with vivid descriptions and an important message.

 

 Posted by at 9:05 pm

Eben Foster’s Casebook

 Possession of Truth  Comments Off on Eben Foster’s Casebook
May 012011
 

I thought I’d take the opportunity to go more in-depth with Eben Foster, FBI agent from Possession of Truth. This is Eben’s overview of the Long Island Serial Killer Case, which is currently unsolved.

The disappearance of Shannan Gilbert, a prostitute, triggered an investigation that led police to discover at least eight, possibly 10, bodies to date on a remote stretch of beach in Long Island.  So far, the police have released very little information, and it looks like they don’t have much to go on. All the bodies were exposed to the elements for a significant period of time, so there’s a dearth of physical evidence.

Law enforcement released a profile of the killer, and in it stated that he had called one of the victim’s sisters and taunted her. The other information that is currently making news is an account of Shannan’s last night. A man, GC, claims that she knocked on his door at 5 in the morning while he was shaving. Shannan screamed for help but as GC was calling the police, she ran outside, under his boat. When an SUV approached and GC had an extended conversation with the driver, she ran off toward the beach.

After analyzing the story many times, too many details are missing or out-of-place. What is the importance of providing the info that he was shaving and then called the police with shaving cream on his face? That’s completely irrelevant, unnecessary and slightly self-aggrandizing. It sounds more like a well-rehearsed alibi. Also, as described by GC, he had a significant conversation with the “Asian” driver of the SUV who was obviously after Ms. Gilbert. If that’s the case, why did he not get the license plate number?  And lastly, why would Ms. Gilbert run when she’d actually managed to find help at five in the morning?  That strikes me as nonsensical.

In conclusion… although the police may be withholding information from the public because of the ongoing investigation, GC’s piece in this puzzle is intriguing. His statements are self-serving, illogical, and easy to pick apart. It seems more like another taunt.

As always, please remember that everyone is considered innocent until proven guilty by a court of law. Happy sleuthing!

 

 Posted by at 8:38 pm

How Possession of Truth Came To Be

 Possession of Truth  Comments Off on How Possession of Truth Came To Be
Apr 252011
 

Wow! My first blog entry. I wasn’t quite sure what to write about but eventually realized that it had to be about Possession of Truth. Even though this novel filled with suspense, mystery and romantic intrigue was electronically published almost two years ago, getting it in print this year has been an amazing experience.

Possession of Truth started out as a serial to be posted on JoyBoy Island, but I had just finished writing From Russia With… and I was more than 18 months ahead of schedule. That’s when the idea of making it into a novel struck.

My partner and I were traveling to Ecuador for his sabbatical, so I had plenty of time to write in the evenings. The last week was spent on a cruise in the Galapagos

Blue Footed Boobies

No, this is not Joy Boy Island.

That meant even more writing time! In between excursions to the island, I was found at the bar with my laptop and my favorite adult beverage, a Bloody Mary.

I finished half the book in a blistering three weeks. My style is fast-paced and easy-to-read without being Spartan and leaving out details.

Once back in the real world, where day-to-day responsibilities take priority, it took three more months to finish writing the book, followed by a solid two months to edit it. I have to admit that I enjoyed every minute and am ecstatic about how it came out.

If you haven’t already, check out the first chapter. It’s free!

 Posted by at 9:09 pm